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These people in their harsh, clinical shirts;
They fly by like hornets, bustling in the nest.
         
You’re doing great, miss!
Their corridors buzz with lights and noise,
Screeching against all hope.

I fear them. I know I fear them.
Well, not them; their representation, but I can’t remember what.
         
It won’t be long, I promise!
It’s like a dream; my heartbeat is away and somewhere else
And breaths come shallow.

The walls crush in, yet stay still.
I know I am waiting.
         
That’s it! Well done!
Waiting.
All this waiting! It is senseless, the waiting. Remember, perseverance.

Many hornets buzz past to see to others, instruments of gleaming chrome naped around them.
I pace.
         
Another few tries, miss!
And I pace.
The floor should give way, but linoleum can resist that temptation.

I stop, and hear a piercing scream from behind a door. I know I love the person who screamed.
And suddenly I remember why I was waiting.
And it gifts me both delirium and dread.
         
Almost!
Oh god, oh god.

         
Congratulations, it’s a girl!
The baby is here.

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A short poem I created for ---->:iconwriters--club:<----, as part of their current (Jan/Feb 2013) competition.

I'll admit, I have no experience of fatherhood; considering my age, I am not planning children for a good few years yet. However, this is what I imagine it could be like.
Then again, I could easily be wrong.

Enjoy.

Link to competition blog; [link]

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=Eulogy-of-Society Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What a nice surprise at the end there :)
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~Angelfire115 Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks; I tried to make a scenario that not many people would think of when they heard 'Imminent Menace,' so I'm glad it surprises people.
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Mood: Love ~AppleArtGeek Feb 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh wow! That' so sweet!

I love it how at first I felt so tense and fearful for what was about to come, but my spirits were lifted when I read the last stanza! :love: awesome! :dance:
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~Angelfire115 Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks; I tried to go with the theme they gave but surprise people :)

Glad you like it!
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~AppleArtGeek Feb 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome! :hug:
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